George and Jack's Preliminary
What I liked about this was:
• There was some suspense music then all of a sudden it was as if the music had been muted which created a tense atmosphere, they maintained the anonymity of the characters by not showing their faces to begin with, which also creates tension.
• There was a close up shot of Jack's mouth which focused on what he was saying. This was a good use of the camera and also made the scene more effective.
What I thought could have been improved:
• At certain points in the task, the camera was shaky; they probably should have used a tripod to get rid of any shakiness. The music played when one of the characters was exiting was out of place and wasn’t conventional of a thriller film, therefore it did not sustain any tension created
Callum and Zoe's Preliminary
What I liked about this was:
• I liked the night time setting, this creates tension and mystery. The street lights added an ominous glow which also creates an atmosphere.
What I thought could have been improved:
• Callum and Zoe probably had a good plan and idea of what they wanted to do but when they came to create it, they had problems with sound as you can hear conversations in the café they filmed in.
• Also some of the camera shots were a bit grainy which was probably down to them filming at night. This should have been considered before.
Livi, Tilly, Claudie and Ellen’s Preliminary
What I liked about this was:
• This task felt like it was put together the best as the scenes are well planned out bar the final scene.
• The shot through the doors gave a prison-like feel seeing as the doors have a cubic pattern on the window that looks like prison bars.
• The close up shot of the girl lying on the stairs shows how she is lifeless; this creates tension and suspense and makes the viewer question what has happened therefore engaging them.
What I thought could have been improved:
• The final scene is not quite as good as the rest of the task, they build suspense and tension up well but fail to sustain that through the last scene.
Cissie, Chloe and Jasmine’s Preliminary
What I liked about this was:
• The intro music was quite good and conventional of a thriller.
What I thought could have been improved:
• Apart from the intro music there wasn’t really much conventional of a thriller included which didn’t help.
• This task didn’t build suspense or tension as well as the other tasks, it spent a lot of time interviewing one character, they had obviously planned the camera shots and script well but the editing side of things didn’t produce much excitement or tension
Matt and Lauren’s Preliminary
What I liked about this was:
• The music worked really well especially during the shots on the stairs.
• When the girl was found in the cupboard, this was effective and the screams and constant struggling really showed how she was vulnerable and scared.
What I thought could have been improved:
• The beginning of their piece was very random and didn't really fit in with the rest of their task but apart from that it was a very well produced piece.
Josh and Victoria’s Preliminary
What I liked about this was:
• The darkness of the scene worked well however at certain points
• The effect of hearing her footsteps walking up the stairs also worked very well as it created a lot of tension.
What I thought could have been improved:
• At some points it was too dark to the point where you couldn't see anything.
• The sound of their scene wasn’t as good as some of the other tasks
• Some pauses during the conversation might have increased the tension and some low volume background suspense music throughout the scene would build suspense and eliminate any shots with no sound.
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